雅思教育教育是国际性英语平台，雅思考试坚持 “沟通为本”的理念，在全球首创从听、说、读、写四方面进行英语能力全面考核的国际考试，能够立体综合地精准测评考生的英语语言运用能力。尤其是在写作方面有自己独立的见解。我们看看具体的实例。

一、雅思写作实例范文

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The table shows percentages of consumer expenditure for three categories of products and services in five countries in 2002.

It is clear that the largest proportion of consumer spending in each country went on food, drinks and tobacco. On the other hand, the leisure/education category has the lowest percentages in the table.

Out of the five countries, consumer spending on food, drinks and tobacco was noticeably higher in Turkey, at 32.14%, and Ireland, at nearly 29%. The proportion of spending on leisure and education was also highest in Turkey, at 4.35%, while expenditure on clothing and footwear was significantly higher in Italy, at 9%, than in any of the other countries.

It can be seen that Sweden had the lowest percentages of national consumer expenditure for food/drinks/tobacco and for clothing/footwear, at nearly 16% and just over 5% respectively. Spain had slightly higher figures for these categories, but the lowest figure for leisure/education, at only 1.98%.

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The graph illustrates the quantitiesof goods transported in the United Kingdom by four different modes of transportbetween the time period of 1974 and 2002. Over this span of 28 years, thequantities of goods transported by road, water and pipeline have all increasedwhile the quantity transported by rail has remained almost constant at about 40million tonnes.

The largest quantity of goodstransported both in 1974 and 2002 was by road(70 million tonnes and 98 milliontonnes respectively) while the lowest both in 1974 and 2002 was bypipeline(about 5 million tonnes and 22 million tonnes respectively). The amountof goods transported by water was constant from 1974 to 1978, where it showedan exponential growth, rising to almost 60 million tonnes after which itplateaued for about 20 years before starting to rise gradually again.

The amount of goods transported byrail is almost constant at 40 million tonnes in 1974 and 2002, with decreasesin quantity in between the years. It is also interesting to note that almostall showed a decrease in 1994 in amount of goods transported except for thepipeline, which actually peaked in that year.

In conclusion, the road remains themost popular method of transporting goods in the UK while water and pipelinesare becoming increasingly used, have not become more popular as a method oftransport.

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It is said that the lack of urban accommodations can cause severe problems in the society and is only to be tackled by the authorities. I completely agree with this idea as the housing shortage is very problematic, and the sole solution calls for the government's actions.

The short supply of houses will indeed trigger several social issues, including an increase in the number of the homeless and a greater possibility of social instability. Without enough places to live, people in the city will find it hard to settle down. They may be left with only a few available condos or houses, and worse still, may have to bid when renting or purchasing them. The competitions engender the asking price and rent to go up in general, which further challenges people's affordability to find a dwelling. Some people, as a result, may be evicted or become homeless. Feeling frustrated and a sense of failure, these people may instead seek comfort through drinking and drugs, which threatens their health and the safety of the city.

The solution, however, is to reduce the number of rough sleepers. To achieve this goal, housing prices should be made to be more affordable, which can only be fulfilled with the help of an authority. For example, the government can distribute rent subsidies to the low-income so they will be able to find an apartment to live, instead of sleeping on the street. Public housing is another practical measure if the government can build its residences and sell them at a knock-down price to the citizens. With these governmental supports, people will find it less hard to settle in the city. Some may even quit alcohol or drugs to find a job to support themselves and lead a happier and healthier life.

In conclusion, I believe the housing shortage is a serious issue leading to many social problems and can only be effectively resolved through the efforts of the government.

二、雅思写作参考标准

1、内容(content)是否切题，立场(position)是否鲜明并得到有效阐释，结构(structure)是否有逻辑性。

2、文章的连贯性主要体现在段落与段落之间，句子与句子之间。

3、雅思写作取得高分的关键在于灵活地运用词汇，多使用非常用词汇，分数一般来说不会低于5.5分。因此，在日常学习中，如何区别低分词汇和高分词汇是关键所在。

4、句子结构的丰富性也是考官给分的一个亮点，好的段落应该由不同的句式组成，而不应该是千篇一律的句子结构。

雅思是国际权威性平台，在写作方面有比较严格的要求，雅思写作水平一般高于其他类型的考试水平，因此需要多加练习。